?

Log in

No account? Create an account
We Actually Write Here's Journal

> recent entries
> calendar
> friends
> profile
> previous 20 entries
> next 20 entries

Sunday, December 3rd, 2006
4:38 pm - jibberish
evilpigeon Across the overshadowed unfortunes of this love where smiles do devote themeselves to you, both lips and beauty, never alone, i know a heart,
a soul transfixed yet to transfer due homage, times does part
the unity of us, albeit in disguise.

(what the fuck)

Saturday, November 18th, 2006
2:53 pm - new to sight and community

kilgoreswake
hello fellow writers,

i'm new to this site, and, in fact, this is my first venture into the blogging sphere. probably like the rest of you, i value good writing nearly as much as anything else there is to value. i admire good writers, and my dream is to be a great writer. i think of myself as a fairly decent writer, but i've never really written anything outside of school assignments. every time i sit down to write a story i think, why am i writing? why do writers write? i don't think i can immerse myself in writing until i answer this basic question. does this question interest you? do some of you struggle with the same question when you put pen to paper and attempt to begin writing? i'm interested in what your thoughts are on why writers write. thank you and i look forward to working with you and learning from you as we WRITE.

(1 Fuckin' A' | what the fuck)

Sunday, November 12th, 2006
12:17 pm - Hi
netprospect We have new intresting works on our enghlish journal
and starting TNGmaniaUS
please visit us as soon as you can (we hope today)!!!!!

(what the fuck)

Sunday, October 29th, 2006
10:52 am - We are sorry
netprospect for not writing in enghlish
you may have russianspeaking users
the idea of this was
that we had some ukranian antisemites
marching in Kiev
and some young fellows tryed to stop them
we were talking on this issue on our journal
18 kids talked what they think
basicly against it

(what the fuck)

8:39 am - Новое !!!!!!
netprospect На наших дневниках для жителей Украины и России
прошла акция "Убийцы или освободители"
об отношении детей и их родителей к воинам ОУН-УПА
в которой приняли участие 18 человек .
Предлогаем тебе лучшее из написаного
"мне вообще надоели все эти мордобои ,штурмы и
разборки на главной площади страны
неужели так сложно решить что можно
и что нельзя делать
в любой нормальной стране это было бы просто невозможно
Низачто не поверю ,что мой дед станет с ними в один ряд на каком-нибудь параде
всё это от безсилия президента я всё больше начинаю в это верить"

"НУ пролетела на выборах и теперь старается набрать себе политических девидентов
играясь с мнением людей
вопрос только в том,кому отдаться
Юле или Ринатику
мне это ясно,что любые фашисты с любыми названиями должны сидеть в тюрме ,а не
маршировать на площади "

"эти люди поднимали руки в небо точно также ,как это делали нацисты в Германии
и что здесь думать -таких людей нужно судить и если бы у нас в стране была сильная власть
(которая есть,но ей не дают работать всякие спекулянты )всё бы было совсем неплохо
и они бы туда даже не сунулись
где же была милиция"

(what the fuck)

Saturday, October 14th, 2006
6:16 am - New upcoming creative writing/role play group

bullets_n_bones
Hi all,
I'm coming to you as one half of a two person writing team that me and my friend have created only recently. Our writing environment involves the wild west as a primary backdrop but it is not only limited to that. We are looking for writers to come join in the fun and create their very own storylines and expand their own universes :D myself and my friend have known each other close on 3 years so if you ever needed to talk to either of us, we would be happy to help. We have a tight close on our primary storyline, often posting for hours at a time. We are also looking to introduce whole new backdrops to the story as it progresses. All our info is on my account, awww come on you know you wanna click :D we wont bite...hard hehe

See you all
Twi

(what the fuck)

Monday, October 2nd, 2006
6:04 pm - WTF???

bruisexviolet83
i'm gonna try this again.

grrrrrrCollapse )

comments? please?

current mood: annoyed

(what the fuck)

5:44 pm - a bit more of my 'dark, disturbing and not for children' memoir

bruisexviolet83
this isn't very long...i guess i should've divided up the posts more evenly. hopefully i'll write more of it soon. it gets kind of painful after this, though.

why is losing your virginity never as fun as you think it'll be?Collapse )

current mood: anxious

(what the fuck)

Saturday, September 16th, 2006
3:01 pm

6ar61e9u1tar5

This is  narrative I am working on about a very unique experience I had several months ago, if you have time I would be delighted to recieve criticism and comments from all of you.

(what the fuck)

Friday, September 1st, 2006
7:25 pm

bruisexviolet83
hi all,
i'm new to this comm, and looking for feedback and concrit on some stuff i've written. i'd love to hear your thoughts! but, be warned...it's dark, disturbing and not for kids.
-emily

follow meCollapse )

(4 Fuckin' A's | what the fuck)

Monday, July 24th, 2006
12:41 am - Something random

yousurroundme

And I'm not doing this for the attention
and i'm not doing this for the pity
and im not doing this so you will look me in the eye and say you love me.

Everything thats happened
all those times i've cried
they have all built me up
and it no longer matters if u try and break me down.

Shit happens
and theres only so much you can do
and i get distracted when I look in you eyes
The deep color the contrast.
I see my reflection in them
and I see my fears in you.
I see your soul so deep. So beautiful.

And I'm not doing this for the attention
and i'm not doing this for the pity
and im not doing this so you will look me in the eye and say you love me.

I am doing this soley and solemely for me.





(hmm i dunno i was bored.. tell me what you think.. please)

(2 Fuckin' A's | what the fuck)

Saturday, July 8th, 2006
5:39 pm - Thoughts

writing_time
I posted this in my journal as well, but since I'm new to the community i figured I should post something.

Thoughts on cutting.Collapse )

(5 Fuckin' A's | what the fuck)

Thursday, May 25th, 2006
3:26 pm - Love

metalogics
He felt great joy when he realized that he was in love with one of his dearest friends, but the fact that she had just announced her commitment with somebody else, filled him with sadness and a little hope. He decided to wait. She would either be happy with the other man or give him a chance.

In fact, after waiting for over a year, she and broke up with her fiancé - just days before the wedding -. He confessed then his love and knew that he was corresponded. From that day onwards they would never be apart. They moved in together together, they got married and finally they decided to have children.

Their family was very close and an example of a balanced diet: The first son had a bean-face and killed to two of his primary schoolmates; the second had a stake-like skin and her ballet instructor got her pregnant at age thirteen; and third, which had a Roquefort cheese-face, used to drown cats in the bathtub until he died from a neglected pneumonia.

(what the fuck)

Monday, May 22nd, 2006
3:32 pm - attn: writers

mus1ck1d15
If you like to write fiction,or any kind of story,please check out my boyfriends new site thats trying to get out the ground
relay write There are stories just starting on there you cna contribute to/read or you can start your own, It's a very interesting concept and I thought you guys would possibly take an interest in it.

(what the fuck)

Wednesday, May 17th, 2006
10:32 pm

529600minutes

hi! my name is caitlin, i'm new to the community. interested in writing, certainly not more than proficient, so i'd love some critiques.  also, i'm not sure if this fits into the scope/goal of community posts...
thanks,
cait

(2 Fuckin' A's | what the fuck)

Monday, May 15th, 2006
11:58 pm - a new play

charlieguiteau
PATRICK SPIERS BRAND NEW BLUE MUFFLERCollapse )

(what the fuck)

Thursday, April 20th, 2006
11:00 pm - Final Fantasy VIII

fantasywind
Final Fantasy VIII

A Novelization by Heather Martin


AN- This is a writing exercise. I am taking the game FFVIII and trying to focus on imagery and description, which I think I lack. Although this is a game, I wish it to stand alone. In other words, I’m trying to make it understandable even if the reader never saw a single frame of the video game. Please let me know if I have failed.

I really need some constructive criticism. What am I doing right? What am I doing wrong? Was there a part that confused you? Was there a part written awkwardly? I don’t want this to be simple fanfic just for fun.

Things I need feedback on for this part: description and grammar. Thank you in advance

Disclaimer- Final Fantasy VIII belongs to Squaresoft

Rating- Suitable for ages over eleven, I’d wager. Just a few mild swear words

Read more...Collapse )

(what the fuck)

Monday, April 17th, 2006
9:56 pm

timeless_story
We've created a site for writers and readers to come and share the joy of words! Our-Muse.com is the place, and we need your help! We've just gone online, and our archives are a bit...empty. That's where you come in! Submit your work to us...long stories, short stories, poetry, songs, or whatever else moves your writing hand, and if we like it, we'll post it on our site for millions to read. We want to provide a place for writers to get their stuff out there for others to read, and we can't do it without you! Sound good? Visit http://www.our-muse.com now and get writing!

(what the fuck)

Friday, March 31st, 2006
12:49 am
onabopq My friend and I are writing a story...
it's basically about this girl named Dani who falls for the new rebel guy at her school, and how their relationship blossoms. It is our first time writing a story together and sharing it with others. It would probably be considered PG-13.
We would appreciate it greatly if you would read it and tell us what you think!

chapter one of The Butterfly Transformation

(1 Fuckin' A' | what the fuck)

Thursday, March 30th, 2006
8:50 am - A NEW PLAY

charlieguiteau
A NEW PLAY!

Amanita PhalloidesCollapse )

Comments? Criticism? HELP?

(what the fuck)

> previous 20 entries
> next 20 entries
> top of page
LiveJournal.com